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Aug 20, 2022Liked by Krissy Eliot

Bravo - outstanding! Came here because Chuck Palahniuk posted this on his Twitter.

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Hahaha, this is great, and part of me hopes that this is actually a secret talent of yours (o.0 ..?) Glad to meet you the other night at Workshop W#1! Would love to see more of your work.

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I read this twice. This is the style I try to promote in my own work. You have a wonderful gift for 1st-person narration. This story is fucking fantastic. I'm subbing you! I have one minor suggestion on two words, but I'm not gonna say it outta fear it could ruin the momentum in your voice. I'd rather have your story as-is than ask you to make a minor change. It's authentic not to change it.

Rock on, Krissy!

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Absolutely phenomenal!

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Brilliant, this story now holds a special place in my fart.

Is this why you were chowing down on popcorn and jerky? Was the intention to make one of us rip one during the workshop?

Thank you for this, I'll go back to watching my sasquatch erotica now.

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